Wednesday, September 13, 2006

The First

When nothing goes your way, you have to improvise.


Blogger Josh said...

Haha, not bad for an improvised post. I'm looking forward to the one you were talking about

5:19 AM  
Blogger noah richter said...

Great for improv, i can really feel the shittyness of your day. I think you should have cursed a lot more... somthing like, "Karma is biting me so hard in the ass" might have been more powerful.

3:17 PM  
Blogger Sean said...

Grugh frustrationface, right? I totally had that all weekend long. I'm looking forward to video about the Des Moines music scene, and what the hell city council?! Okay, sweet.

8:53 AM  
Blogger "violet lucca" said...

Not bad for improvised post. However, it would've been nice if instead of talking about what you originally wanted to do and why you were busy, you would've explored frustration in general.

2:01 PM  
Blogger vlogpost said...

really really good. I stayed intersted throughout. good storyteller too, and it totally worked as a post. not too long, not too short, and engaging. the editing was a tiny bit choppy which is totally understandable, but as long as we're doing constructive criticism here. on the whole I want to convey that it was really good. all the more so in that it was probably made very very quickly.

2:32 PM  
Blogger zach kmiec said...

Sorry to hear about your frustration. It would have been interesting even to just hear you talk about the stuff you'd been trying to work with. I look forward to seeing it once you get things to work out.

1:29 AM  

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